:D!!!
Great job man..
good potential in this track..
loved the hard synth that enters at 0:25 and plays through until the end.
one thing i suggest is to take the hard synth and after a while during the song m maybe make a melody with it or bend it more.. just somehow mix it up a bit with that one synth and possible layer it with another!
I liked the bassline and the kick! nice and hard.
Great work man!
keep at it.